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Re: Crystal Tears (P)
« Reply #30 on: February 04, 2008, 11:09:41 PM »

Wow.. I am really well, speechless. I never really thought that any of my work would do that to someone....
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« Reply #31 on: February 06, 2008, 03:13:39 AM »

Chanallee took the words from my mouth. You poetry inspires thought and emotion in the reader. Beautiful. Good job Yami ^^
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« Reply #32 on: February 07, 2008, 03:11:01 PM »

Tender wings,
of an angels touch
calls down to earth,
by a single call.

A single wish,
that you are fine.
A final goodbye,
Is that is left.

You say that
you love me,
That I was the only one.
And here I am
broken from what you have done.

I cry at night.
wondering why,
You lied you to me,
and wish I was gone.

I cry for you,
A single tear.
I can not longer stay.
NO longer fight.

I pray for your forgiveness,
I saw no other way.
I was left to darkness.
And in darkness,
I will forever stay.

                                     Yami

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« Reply #33 on: February 08, 2008, 07:12:52 PM »

Very creepy...it seems to me almost like a suicidal message from a lunatic. It is so well done I abosultly love it (no offence ment with the suicidal lunatic thing as I can tell that that is not the truth about you)
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« Reply #34 on: February 09, 2008, 03:07:35 AM »

Wow. Once again... speechless
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« Reply #35 on: February 10, 2008, 11:00:18 AM »

Very creepy...it seems to me almost like a suicidal message from a lunatic. It is so well done I abosultly love it (no offence ment with the suicidal lunatic thing as I can tell that that is not the truth about you)

No offense taken.. I can understand that by thw way it comes across.. Being sick can really warp what you write sometimes, and that is just one of the result of me being sick...
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« Reply #36 on: February 10, 2008, 01:11:20 PM »

Found one that was written in 2006, about two years ago. I must have been in a really been in a mood when I wrote this...  Enjoy.

Shades of Darkness


Moonless Night
Shadowed hearts.
Shades of darkness
full of comfront
and delight.
hatred, dishonesty
unfaithfulness too.
They hate me
cause I am different
disowned by one
looked down on by the others.
I am of tainted blood,
a curse is what they call me.
A human, but demon
a curse from the gods,
to punish my family.
What have I done
to deserve such pain?
Users and Abusers
that is all they are,
they take and take
and never care
giving you a life
you can no longer bare.
What have I done
to deserve such a fate?
why must I be punished
for something I didn't do?
Why hate a child,
who had no choice
to be born.
                                             Yami
                     
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« Reply #37 on: February 11, 2008, 03:04:51 PM »

I was just inspired to write this. I hope you enjoy, and please say your thoughts, good or bad.

Your tender hands.
lightly play my soul.
Calling out to me.
Your precious love song.

You loving voice,
so soft, and sweet.
A gentle reminder,
Of the ocean breeze.

Yor tender heart,
your will to speak,
the perfect mate,
for all to see.

                              Yami
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« Reply #38 on: February 12, 2008, 01:49:56 AM »

Aww... I loves! *cries*
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« Reply #39 on: February 12, 2008, 09:16:29 AM »

* hands over a tissue*
Thanks, and I glad that you love it.. or one of them Cheesy
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« Reply #40 on: February 12, 2008, 09:33:39 PM »

This one is something that I really don't understand why I wrote it, or what I was thinking.. ( well that is a lie, casue I know what I am thinking.) If you don't like it, or don't want to read it, that is fine.

 Sometimes it feels like you are alone, that you are unable to be loved. Doubt fills your soul, and all you can think is this:

Why do you love me

Why do you love me
when you know that I am broken
That I am unworthy,
used good, or tainted.

why do you try to help me,
when I only want to be alone.
I am broken,
Unworthy of your love.
Why,
why do you try to save me,
when my life means nothing at all.

Why do you call me,
your angel in the sky.
when all I have is pain.

why do you care,
when all others,
wish me to be dead.

why do you love me,
and care for me at all.

                                         Yami
 
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« Reply #41 on: February 14, 2008, 05:56:09 PM »

New Poem!!

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I give my heart to you,
and hope you take it.
A special gift
I now give to you,
In hopes that it is safe.

I give my life to you
My every hope,
my every dream. 
I give it all to you.

I give you the chance to choose.
To live your life
to free your heart,
and truly be yourself.

I give you everything
and ask you only one thing.
Show yourself love,
as you have shown me.

deicated to a very special person in my life.
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« Reply #42 on: February 17, 2008, 03:08:52 AM »

*takes tissue and soon runs through a whole box* I loves them all! They are very good my dear
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« Reply #43 on: February 19, 2008, 08:17:45 PM »

New Poem

      It is really hard to understand hurt or sorrow, unless you have felt it yourself. You can say that you do, but you will never know it really until you feel the heartache caused from loving someone, Who never loved you back....

Lost Melody

I have a special song
that's protected by my heart.
a special song I only give
To the one that hold my heart.

Over years and years
I thought I found him.
His song touched my soul.
I wanted to give everything,
to match my song with his.

I thought I knew the Melody
your tender heart once sang.
I thought I knew the guy,
whom I gave my heart to,
but shattered it in two.

I tried to find the many pieces
And lock it all away.
I never want to feel again,
for my heart is gone,
and shall never come back.

I cried for days
My song was gone
and with it too,
My life began to fade.

Now I am nothing but a shell.
An empty space without a purpose.
NO one can save me,
My song is gone
and with it my life,
that I had once known.

                                   Yami
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« Reply #44 on: February 20, 2008, 05:41:55 PM »

 Shocked Shocked :oWOW!!!!!... I can't say anymore Cry other than I have been there and have yet to fully escape
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