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Monoyami
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I am glad you like it..
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I really like this one a lot.. It tells a small story about how one girl feels in her life. And how she is trying to find who she is. It is untitle, cause it is hard to find one that suits it well.
Look deep into her eyes
and you will see
the pain and loneliness
that she always feels.
A young kit
mixed in a family of dogs,
No one to turn to,
No one to love her.
She is always alone
But the dogs don't care
to them, she is an outsider
She does not belong.
Hurt by her family
she trys to find love,
only to fall deep
for a strong protective wolf.
Look back in her eyes now,
and you will see
she is much happier,
Now that she is with,
her strong, loving wolf
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would you believe me if I said she was..
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Wow. Your poems are inspired. You truly have a gift. They are beautiful.
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Wow.. ummm, I really don't know what to say to that at all.
But thank -you.
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It really is amazing what one can do late at night, when thinking about someone. New poem
Forever yours
Arms wrapped around,
Gently touching the skin.
You hold on tight,
as you lovingly whisper,
I am yours as you are mine.
Forever and always
Together we Belong.
You gently kiss my lips,
Savoiring the taste.
Like the finest wine ever in town.
You say my name,
as if there was only me.
Touching my heart,
In all the right places.
A tiny tear falls from my eyes,
as you walk away from all that you know.
A final kiss,
with so much passion.
A cherished gift,
Never forgotten.
A final goodbye,
all that was left
As a single tear falls
with so much regret.
Waiting patiently
for you to come home
Memories of the past
Haunting my dreams.
And still I wait
for you to return.
Knowning for once,
That I am finally loved.
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I guess you can all it a sad love poem. after all, it is sad. however, I will leave it up to you. It has no title yet.
Love is never what one expects.
It is ever changing
and can come at anytime for you.
It is more then what a young girl knew.
She felt it was nothing,
but pain and disgrace.
She never had someone that loved her,
and maybe that is why,
she closes her heart whenever it i is near.
She was a afraid to cry,
afraid to ask for someone.
She felt alone, and completely lost.
She never knew love,
and never to learn it again.
She was hurt and betrayed.
SHe cries herself to sleep
wishing that maybe,
just maybe it could be different.
that maybe one day,
she will find the love,
that she needs.
Yami.
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I reiterate what I said before. Beautiful. Breathtaking. Inspired. Keep with your gift.
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| thank you both of you, and I will. ^^ your comments have help me to keep writing, so again thnxs |
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no problems my dear. we all need a little push once in a while. i know that one for sure. and with your writing, i'm sure you will go far. ^^ keep with it hun.
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You are right, we judt need a push in the right direction sometimes 
( Emotions can really suck sometimes, especailly if some thing sad forms from it) Another poem. ( ( emotional moments really can suck)
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No lights seems to shine.
As this broken hearts seems to cry,
She wants and wishes for better thing
and yet those dreams are never heard.
A silent night
No sound is heard,
A single tear,
Falls from her eyes,
She is hurt,
But can't explain why.
She longs for someone,
anyone to set her free,
To help her feel
what she knows she needs.
But all the dreams,
those wishes so long agao
Seem to far away,
SO far from her reach.
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