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Kit Kat's Songs (L)
« on: January 16, 2008, 09:44:40 PM »
This is a song I wrote with my friend Coldfire in mind. He's my best friend and I love him dearly. I am open to any types of constructive criticism, or comments. Enjoy! ^^

Footsteps...

Verse One
I used to walk
Through the pouring rain
Wandering aimlessly
A lonely girl
With a lonely heart
With nothing meant to be

I used to walk...

Verse Two
And those footsteps
Through the pouring rain
Led you straight to me
And you discovered my broken soul
And you set me free

Chorus One
Can you hear me?
Calling out your name in the dark?
Can you feel me?
Crying in your arms throughout the night?
Can you feel my heart and soul
Needing you close to me?

Verse Three
And now I walk
Through the pouring rain
Holding you close to me
No longer lonely
With a broken heart
You have set me free

Chorus Two
Can you hear me?
Breathing quietly in the dark?
Can you feel me?
Sleeping peacefully throughout the night?
Can you fell my heart and soul
Loving you endlessly?

I used to walk
Through the pouring rain
Until you set me free...
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Re: Kit Kat's Songs (L)
« Reply #1 on: January 16, 2008, 09:52:19 PM »
I think the rythm is very good, and the flow is quiet poetic. I think it is beautiful
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Re: Kit Kat's Songs (L)
« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2008, 09:54:18 PM »
really good, and Kaleen said it all for me. Rythm is good. the flow is fantastic... something i could sing to
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Re: Kit Kat's Songs (L)
« Reply #3 on: January 17, 2008, 02:32:28 PM »
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Re: Kit Kat's Songs (L)
« Reply #4 on: January 18, 2008, 02:18:11 PM »
Much love ^^ now i want to hear it
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Re: Kit Kat's Songs (L)
« Reply #5 on: January 18, 2008, 02:20:22 PM »
Thanks very much guys. When I'm finished with it, it will have a full orchestra part to it as well as for a rock band. I'm very excited about it. ^^
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Re: Kit Kat's Songs (L)
« Reply #6 on: January 19, 2008, 11:04:45 PM »
Thats soo awsome cant wait to hear it
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Re: Kit Kat's Songs (L)
« Reply #7 on: January 20, 2008, 07:54:58 PM »
same
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Re: Kit Kat's Songs (L)
« Reply #8 on: January 20, 2008, 10:13:58 PM »
Thanks guys ^^
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