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Chanallee's Poem (P)
« on: January 16, 2008, 09:04:32 PM »
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Trapped

I feel trapped
Like a fly in a spider's web
I can't do anything, go anywhere
Like a fly in a spider's web
There is only one difference between the fly and myself
The web(s)
The fly's web is the spider's web
My web is my house
No wait, My web is my bedroom
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Re: Chanallee's Poem (P)
« Reply #1 on: January 16, 2008, 09:12:57 PM »
Confinement not good for ones health.
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« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2008, 09:14:06 PM »
i wrote that july 1 2005 when i didn't want to go to the family reunion
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Re: Chanallee's Poem (P)
« Reply #3 on: January 16, 2008, 09:14:21 PM »
No it's not I acutal remeber her writting this peice she was really sad and frustrated
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Re: Chanallee's Poem (P)
« Reply #4 on: January 16, 2008, 09:36:06 PM »
It's powerful. Your emotions show very much through this piece. I like how you related yourself to the fly and the differences between the fly's confinement and yours. Short, but sweet. Good job!
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« Reply #5 on: January 16, 2008, 09:40:47 PM »
thank you
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Re: Chanallee's Poem (P)
« Reply #6 on: January 17, 2008, 02:33:09 PM »
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« Reply #7 on: January 17, 2008, 06:02:39 PM »
thanks
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« Reply #8 on: January 20, 2008, 11:43:07 AM »
nice work
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« Reply #9 on: January 20, 2008, 07:43:55 PM »
thank you
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Re: Chanallee's Poem (P)
« Reply #10 on: February 11, 2008, 09:40:06 PM »
This poem i wrote just a couple of years ago

Why Did You Have To Go?
By Melissa Young

Why did you have to go?
I see you have gone. But why?
You have done nothing wrong.
Took a few things with out
Asking, everyone does
That every once in a while

Like a daughter to you that
You never had you said
Before you left.

Like a father to me that
That I never had
I wish I would have said
Before you left.
Why did you have to go?

Dedicated to James Burr. A man I
Considered to be a father to me.


i forgot i had it... now the man i did dedicate it too i no longer respect but i still keep the poem because it ment a lot to me at the time.  What happened was he was a border and was on his last straw with Don and don had enough of James so he kicked him out while my mom was at a basketball game with Scott.
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Re: Chanallee's Poem (P)
« Reply #11 on: February 22, 2008, 12:50:01 PM »
I remeber you writing that and how impressed your family was with it. I still love it, it convays what you are trying to say very well
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Re: Chanallee's Poem (P)
« Reply #12 on: February 25, 2008, 01:10:30 PM »
thank you baby
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